Konami Hatake

[macdaddyc]

Name: Konami Hatake

*Nickname: Kota

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Ninja Level: Genin

Appearance ( Pic or detailed info ): He looks like Kakashi only a little better. His eyes are that which are gold and has a great smile. Konami's hair is like Goku's from Dragonball Z only white.

Personality: He is a lot like Sasuke with the quietness and the coolness. Then again, he's like Naruto with being a knucklehead sometimes.

Home Village: Leaf

Justus ( Max 4 ): Fire Dragon: Konami summons a fire like dragon using the Fire Style.

Water Dragon: Same technique as Zabuza and Kakashi.

Earth Dragon: Konami summons a earth like dragon using the Earth Style.

Wind Dragon: Konami summons a wind like dragon using the Wind Style.

Strengths: Intellect, Power, Stamina, Willpower, Speed

Weaknesses ( you must have at least one ): Defense

*Date of birth: June 5

*Blood type: B+

*Height (in feet and inches please): 5'4''

*Sexuality (Gay, lesbian, straight, or bi): Straight

*Relatives: Kakashi Hatake

*Crush: Sakura

*Friends: Anybody that knows Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke as well as themselves

*Special Traits/Abilities: Sharingan

[raethen]

Technically, you do not have to listen to my advice as I am not a mod or anything, but I want to clear up some things for you so that the admin or others don't have to.

1) Kakashi does not naturally have the Sharingan; he recieved it from a dying friend shortly after he lost his left eye (the friend had his Sharingan eye transplanted), so, even if you were a relative, you would not have it.

2) You seem to have changed something, but I will not reprimand you, in case you didn't; the jutsu section says 'max 3,' not 'max 4.' Please take out one jutsu. Oh, and, if I am not correct, tell me, but I believe those jutsus are all beyond Genin strength.

3) You seem to have deleted the 'background' section. That is a nescessity, I believe. Please bring it back and type it up.

4) Your appearance and personality are lacking words. I do believe there is a rule on the amount of words put into them, so please be more detailed.

5) This is not a rule or anything, but I, myself, personally, am asking you to please be more realistic on your strength and weaknesses. From the sound of it, Konami is great in all subjects except for defence, even though he is only 13... You do not have to change it, but for realism, I'm asking you, please do.

6) Some other sections in the end of the profile also seem to be deleted. Please put them back and answer them, even if it is just "unknown" or something.

Anyway, thanks for reading. Please tell me, anyone, if I got something wrong.

[Articuno]

Uhhh... Thanks for the help Rae, but this bio is so bad I wouldn't bother lol read the rules, please, and there's more then just what Rae pointed out... Oh, adn Rae, in the future please ask me before posting on another bio, that's the staff's job, but I'll just leave you with a warning this time